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I wish you were easy
easy to forget
or to lend a hand
I wish your eyes had not pierced me
(like x-rays)
like x-rays, yes, and tumorous
is what this love is, draining me
cancerously into poetry
A poem of small loves, and of distance.
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numbskulled00 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very nice
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D-E-M-Emrys Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's so very simple but (excuse the pun) it's clinically intuitive to me. It inspires the reader to think and question the intent and how it fits to them also.
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rober2 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you, you are too kind :)
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D-E-M-Emrys Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Saw your forum post - thought I'd pop by!
Love it! Very stirring piece!
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rober2 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you - do you have any specific thoughts on why?
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