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It is not that your hands
are not here to be held, but that
they are pointing over hills I cannot cross
to seas that are salt with excitement
just as
the trees do not grieve the passing of the leaves,
except that they are over the horizon.
are not here to be held, but that
they are pointing over hills I cannot cross
to seas that are salt with excitement
just as
the trees do not grieve the passing of the leaves,
except that they are over the horizon.
Literature
Might
The power,yes or no.
The eternal twilight of choice and suspense.
The force to move a person,a nation, a decision.
And the doubt of its outcome.
Might.
Literature
Take Me Away
Take Me Away
There he was. With his big hazel brown eyes, staring right at me. I could see him breathe through his nostrils. His breath so warm I could feel it against my body. He looked so calm and his eyes were shining as bright as the harvest moon. His face was wide and he looked old. Not ancient, just old.
When did he get here? How(!) did he get here? It’s awkwardly quiet. Do the other’s see him too? Maybe I’m dreaming.
“Ouch!” I pinched myself.
Okay, so I’m not dreaming. Maybe it’s just me imagining things. Again.
"Come with me" he said with a firm, yet ever so soothing voice. His voice deep
Literature
I'm letting you go
Song for my sons that I wrote
12/22/2015
50 miles of driving rain
on the hood of my car
50 miles away from you
never seem so far
I know I've made my mistakes
I pushed you away
but see
I'm letting you go
because you mean that much to me
it'll be a sacrifice
I want you to know
it took a lot of thinking
the decision to go
It ain't something that I did on a dime
and I know somehow , someway
that over time
you'll understand the reasons why
And you'll see
That I'm letting you go
because you mean that much to me
People get to leaving
For all kinds of reasons
And many blame the other for why
But you need to see
That this time it
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I can't determine if this is a bit too sappy. Oh well, I think I got in some good metaphors and whatnot, and I like the rhythm. I also think I have perhaps a bit too much of a fetish for hands as a symbol for human contact. Is this a cliche or am I the only one doing it? Critiques and feedback welcome.
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Lots of love for the last two lines.